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Inside my mind there is glass
Shattered
There was once a box of myself
My happiness
My aspirations
My all
What happened when you threw your stones?
I think the answer is crystal clear
It’s apparent
You broke me
You left me dieing
You killed me
I'm...... Shattered....
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CursedArchangels Featured By Owner May 22, 2009
I like the box metaphor. Everything that I am is kept in a safe that only a couple of people know the combination to. Insanity Pledge! (Check out my gallery if you wanna see what I mean)

This is a really good poem, which I came across while attempting to find a poem of my own with the same name (which I've just realised isn't up yet >< ). I like how it's short and to the point, it leaves the reader wondering what's happened to this box which has shattered it so, and wanting to help.

:+favlove:
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UnCanard Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2005
:hug: ...just :hug: ...I don't know how else to respond.
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2005
Aww, It's fine.... :hug:
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UnCanard Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2005
:hug: I just feel like I should have had some other response...but my first and only instinct was the protective one...
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2005
:hug: Aww i know my dear, I know..
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Aurora--Rose Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2004  Hobbyist Writer
awesome!
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2004
Thankies :hug:
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ooooooo vewy nice
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2004
Thankies :hug:
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ur velcome ............arrrrrr!!!!!
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