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And the heavens did open and from them my sorrow came forth,  
Bleeding down upon us all we sleep, we weep.
We do not realise until we begin to drown, we are lost!
Lost. Lost from what keeps us sane in our reality.

The bloody bedclothes you rest upon strangle you as you lay awake at night,
Trust comes far too easily to you, it turns you bitter.
Have I been dripping acid into your ears for too long now?
You should have told me, I would have increased the quantity.

Raping my mind with thoughts of a better humanity,
Humanity can’t get ant better than this, we are animals.
Animals my children animals, you play with so innocently,
You play with them, as puppets on a string.

She always did love to play.
©2005-2009 ~SentimentallyScared
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:iconpsychobunnygrl:
Wow.. that was a powerful twist at the end.. :w00t:

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Dreams are for the creative and strong hearted.
And I know that I will never ever stop my dreaming.

*!*MY CLUBS*!*
~Mitochondrial-Love
~Comment-Army
~Dark-Writings
~TreeHouseSociety
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Aww, thank you my dear. :cuddle:

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Pick up your paper, and walk off the edge of the world.
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Your good at this. Woot woot.

X.x
:iconpsychobunnygrl:
^_^ You're welcome darling!! :hug:

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Dreams are for the creative and strong hearted.
And I know that I will never ever stop my dreaming.

*!*MY CLUBS*!*
~Mitochondrial-Love
~Comment-Army
~Dark-Writings
~TreeHouseSociety
:iconsentimentallyscared:
Thank you.

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Pick up your paper, and walk off the edge of the world.
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"We do not realise until we begin to drown, we are lost!"

The first two stanzas are awe-inspiring. I'm not sure how I feel about the end, but this is a very powerful, solid, and eloquent poem... well done!

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"If you were my husband, I'd put cyanide in your tea."
"If you were my wife, I'd drink it."
Tonight, I raise my glass to Winston Churchill, for he was a great man.
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Thank you so very much! :hug:

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Pick up your paper, and walk off the edge of the world.

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