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Engulfed in depression again
Eternally lost
These feelings of mine I suspend
My heart so soft
So broken
I am dieing here
So many words left unspoken
So many things left unclear
Remove me form this misery
Look and see
Go ahead
Kill me  
I dont like this ..... tell me what you think ..
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without-chainsaw Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2005
Why so hard on yourself?

your good, jup. Nice words. I can relate.

Well, laters
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2005
Because it's me I guess.

Thank you very much.

Later.
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without-chainsaw Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2005
Your cool and nice. ^.^
Be my friend? I'm semi-desparate. I like guys. Just so you no, but I respect if other people don't.
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without-chainsaw Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2005
My responce:
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YAY >.<
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2005
Aww, I don't try to be.
Aww, I'll be your friend. I prefer girls. I hate men.
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posingoverdose Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2005
The southern death style:

The silver bullet - so earthly fast.
Forever Rope - so hard to find.
The silver bullet - so earthly thrashed.
Forever Rope - symbol of Trust.

The mandrake's root, your restless lover.
The Morning blade, first to awake.
The morning shame that you can't take.
The Mandrake's root. In venenum veritas...

The silver bullet. The Southern Deathstyle.
Forever Rope - forever tied.
The mandrake's pill - your magic route to nowhere.
The morning breaks - it's lunar still...

The Elements all moulded together.
A family whose name is Death.
The Elements in circlefear.
Bullet, Root, Blade and Rope
All hold so dear!
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xybre Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
"I'm a loser baby... so why don't you kill me..."
Well, it seems like the last couple of lines are saying "Kill me, I dare you."
Coolness.
Love the poem, love the pic. (but you knew that already) ;)
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2004
Lol they are saying exactly that .. Lol thanks :hug: i did, but i wouldn't have know if you didn't tell me :glomp:
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collected-dark Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2004
i like it. blunt. straight to the point. :+fav:
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2004
Thank you so much :hug:
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10-cut-here-01 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2004
umm...like i dont really understand the picture..it doesnt really express this poem very well cause the way you have the angle ...and you can see the camera and that kinda makes it...i dunno...it makes it like lat..te dah...just playing around....but anywho the poem is written pretty good....and i like how its really plain and to the point....
doug______________________
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2004
Yes i think the camera fucks the whole thing up ... ah well .. Thanks dude ... i'm glad you liked the writing thanks for the comment :hug:
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xSarah Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2004   Photographer
O_O
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2004
..... ooook ... that a good thing ...
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jademercenary Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
the best short poem i have ever read! :glomp:
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2004
Really? wow .. Thank you so much :hug:
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jademercenary Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2004
lol you're welcome! :hug:
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egotistic Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
I have a thing for depressed poetry. I love what you write.

Plus, the poem came with a picture of you. :p A-ha! Have a :+fav: from me.
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2004
Lol thank you so much :hug: *shudders* you like that pic ? .. thank you so much for the fave :glomp:
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egotistic Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2004
Yeah :) I do like the picture.. even though it gives bad vibes with the "KILL ME".

SMILE! I want to see a happy picture.

As for the fav., you deserve it.
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2004
Lol ... some day i'll take a happy picture :hug:
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alienhouseplant-ink Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the pic and the poem... but I could never kill you, (but I'd kill anyone who DID kill you.) :nod: :hug: :+fav:
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
aww thankies ... i dont like it all that much ... ah dude you dont have to do that .. :hug: thanks for the fave
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saltyjon Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
tis a gud poem but not likin the subject matter. wot is gettin u so depressed. as eva i love the piccy of u, so sexy :hump: an the skriblin. :hug: :smooch:
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
.. just a load of stuff ..... lol i'm not sexy and i like my leg the way it is lol ... :hug: :smooch:
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saltyjon Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
we hav been though this b4 havnt we, im a male an think ur sexy, that means u r sexy :hump: i lik ur leg lots aswell :hug: :smooch:
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
:shakefist: i still dont think im sexy .. i think i'm going to have to start poking you .. :hug: :smooch:
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saltyjon Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
lik i sed b4 if i can poke arund inside u :hump: , i no u wont me 2 :D :hug: :smooch:
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
u do ? ... oook i wont poke you .. :hug: :smooch:
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saltyjon Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
ok but i can still poke arund inside u rite. :hump: :hug: :smooch:
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
uh nooooo .... :hug: :smooch:
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bkt666 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
Lol thankies :hug:
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bkt666 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
:hug: your welcome
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WildFire-FlameWood Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
hey, this is cool dude, u is a gr8 writer
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
Lol Thank you :hug: .. thats me in the pic ... RUN FOR YOUR LIVES POEPLE !!!
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WildFire-FlameWood Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
aww, u aint that bad dude
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
Lol .. i love the word dude .. i say it all the time .... :hug:
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WildFire-FlameWood Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
yay, a fellow Dude'r :glomp:
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
lol YAY and we all say dude !! :hug:
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WildFire-FlameWood Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
DUDE :lol:
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
DUDE!!!!! :lmao:
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nicetry-badluck Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
its not bad.. i dont know about being able to see the camera but i like the mirror and psychotic scribblings concept.. i dig on the poetry piece..
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SentimentallyScared Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2004
lol .. me psychotic ? .. never ..... lol i am ... i should be locked away .. Thank you :hug:
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