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Buffeted by the silent scream of my own disquiet,
Tedium stirs in the pit of my stomach,
Running his course through my veins,
Weighing on my heart, consuming my mind.

The binds that restrict me are my own,
The freedom I yearn for is within myself,
I am knocking at locked doors,
Whilst holding all the keys.

Unfamiliarity brings a chill I shy away from,
Comforted by familiarity and illusory safety,
I must force myself out into the cold, to grow,
But I am weary, and hesitant to stand on my own.
©2007-2009 ~SentimentallyScared
:iconsentimentallyscared:

Author's Comments

A brilliant day?

I have not been quite so honest in some time.
But this is I.

I think, therefore I am.
I think, therefore I am.
I think, therefore I am.

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:icondaru-jericho:
Well written, as for usual. I especially like the personification of tedium and the lines:

"I am knocking at locked doors,
Whilst holding all the keys."


Beautifully written. Well done.

--
Serenity in Misanthropy
:iconscarredsodeep:
I am glad that you are honest. And prolific. And productive, and happy.

It feels good, doesn't it?

Love this line: Tedium stirs in the pit of my stomach.

--
"You could convince the grass that it was the moon."
:iconsentimentallyscared:
I am glad too.
It does feel good, and after reading your journal entries, I feel productive again. Though I do feel confused/lost in what I believe.

--
Pick up your paper, and walk off the edge of the world.
:iconscarredsodeep:
Tell me of your beliefs, dear, and we can talk about them. Maybe some of the beliefs I've been discovering of my own can be of service to your confusion.

--
"You know who lost World War Z? Whales."
:iconsentimentallyscared:
I have responded to this in note form. :)

--
Pick up your paper, and walk off the edge of the world.

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